Date:22/5/2021
Dear Madame addition
Just informing you this letter to let you know how I truly feel about you,and I did not had the courage to tell you face to face so I am writing this letter for you to show you my feelings and affection for you Madame addition.The way we could be on our journey to be getting married and I could bake a cake for you and if I am not adding enough sugar you just add how much you like and if you are adding to much sugar I just add a bit touch of salt so the cake won't be salty it will be average little sweet and salty after taste will be good with a cherry on top.The way I feel about you is unbelievable,when your not they I feel like the world's going and crash.I don't want to see you going with multiple or any other person we are different in many ways I subtract and you are addition but everybody is not perfect,we are not the same but I can teach you how to subtract and you can teach me how to add in different ways.We don't have the same personality but If we get to know each other that can change in a timing,you are like finding a square root of the number 10 and am 100 and When you divide 10 by 100 you get back 10 so its to it's like a finding peace with someone like me. When all this lockdown is done and everything's open back we can go to the beach and just relax and watch the sun go down and the moon just comes up at the right time to watch the beautiful sky write me back when you have time for now bye.
Yours respectfully
Mister subtraction
Reference
1)Johannes,Widmann.Mercantile Arithmetic.Germany,1489
2)lee,Fixel.Livemint. Retrieved 11 May 2011.
3)Boyer, Carl B. (1991), A History of Mathematics, John Wiley & Sons, Inc, ISBN 0-471-54397-7
Hi Sudesh, The flow of your letter was off as there was no form of transition to the sentences and this made it difficult to comprehend what you wee trying to relay. You had many grammatical errors like forgetting capital letters when spelling names, lack of punctuation marks and also the misuse of conjunction words which made the letter a bit hard to read.
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ReplyDeleteHey Sudesh your letter was pretty off and your comprehension wasn't good at all but atleast you tried.
ReplyDeleteAfternoon Sudesh good attempt there were a lot of spelling and grammatical error and where each paragraph begin? it was jumbled well done.
ReplyDeleteGood day Sudesh ,This letter was unprofessionally done. There was a lot of grammar errors and the comprehension was off. Good work though .
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